Comet Trails

the picture is a oil pastel drawing of mine!

a moon rose high

stained with your hands

all purity washed away

in the tide

dripping from the sea

a contest of wills

battling for hope

razing the sky

but failing to claim

the stars that

mark on

the path of the comets

fading trails

like secret doors

in the labyrinth of

my mind

the key I once held

stole from my grasp

cast down to the earth

you stained below

Author's Note

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Reviews

[deeps]

Wow! A artist and a wonderful writer
This is a wonderful write,
Enjoyable read here.

like secret doors
in the labyrinth of
my mind

Such lovely words here, i like this.
Wonderful write