Dreamcatcher

Dreamcatcher
catch my dreams,
no, not the good ones,
not the peacefull, lovely
and spiritual ones

Just,
just the bad ones,
the morbid,
the kind of dream,
produced by doubts,
by voices inside my head,
which are clearly not mine,
but voices of those,
failing and never standing up
to try again
voices of those,
cursing the wind,
yelling at the wind,
for taking away,
for abducting,
their hopes
and returning them dazed,
shatterd and numb.

Dreamcatcher,
just climb inside
climb inside my head

Author's Note

Again an improvised poem, inspired by a poem I wrote last night in German, a poem by Dhiman and a comment from Jacob, who brought the idea of a dreamcatcher into my head.

Reviews

[Ethan Bartiromo]

This is very deep, it goes into the parts of thought that we usually don't talk about. It's a nice combination of starting happy then it got darker then again it got a little happier. Not necessarily Happy, but that's the point.

P.S. This is my first time posting a review so hope it's good. lol

[forgotten_ghosts]

Thank you very much,Ethan!
It's good don't worry! Glad your first review was to one of my poems!

[Woody]

If only. Nicely done, FG.
"cursing the wind for abducting their hopes" vey nice. I like it.

[forgotten_ghosts]

Thank you very much, Wood! I'm glad you liked it!

[Jade]

this is different from the stuff I read, but different is good. enjoyed

[forgotten_ghosts]

Glad you enjoyed it!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

if only the dreamcatcher could be like the Catcher in the Rye...take away the bad stuff...keep us safe in our dreams, because too often the dreams become reality...

nicely done

[forgotten_ghosts]

Thank you very much, Jacob!