Suspense

Suspense

A Poem by dancingintherain

This suspense is unbearable
I heard the news today, and thought no...
It can't be true.
But people change
And maybe sometimes I just have to let go.
I fought and I fought and i fought for you,
But you won't fight back
It's like you're just standing there like a statue,
Unmoving, and I can't feel you
Your warmth and your touch is gone...
Maybe forever, I don't know
I don't want to know anymore
It's too much pain
I just wanna forget everything.
Everything about us
Because every time I think about us and all the good times,
It's like a million knives stabbing at my heart

Yes, i thought you were the one,
But i thought too fast.
Too hasty did i trust you
It doesn't matter if you were the best,
The most respectful, sweetest, caring guy I have ever met...
No! I'm doing it again!
Can't think of those times.
10 days is too short a time to love someone,
Absolutely impossible

And so now, i hear you're asking out someone new
Don't know whether or not it's true..
Kinda dont want to...
How can you jump from one to the next so quickly?
No, you don't know what love is
You aren't ready for this
You're no different
Even though it's hard to say, you may be just the same


© 2011 dancingintherain


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Yes people do change sometimes for the better and sometimes for the worse. I really like the detail of this. Feelings never die when we still love someone, eventually they will fade away. Memories are there to remind us. Like this!

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Mt. Pleasant, SC



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Lucy. 18. Songwriter and singer. Learning how to play guitar. Writing is how I clear my mind. more..

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