All These Doubts

V1:
It all started when you made a promise
That was what has caused all this
You told her you'd be her date to the dance
Didn't give my feelings a second glance
You wouldn't share or even compromise
And I cried myself to sleep every night
I didn't know if what I felt was right or wrong
And everyday dragged out so long

Chorus:
You tell me your bond is your word
But I made a mistake trusting you is what I've learned
I feel like there's something you're not telling me
And you barely talk to me
And I start having all these doubts
You make so many excuses to me
And I'm beginning to think
You're just dating me
Because single is not what you wanna be
And I have all these doubts

V2:
I've told my parents all about you
And my mom is actually letting me date you
But it's very irritating when you cancel plans
And you won't let me hang out with you and your friends
We haven't seen each other in a month
And you don't know that I'm really hurt
I'm starting to think you're telling me lies
Because you don't care or even try

-Chorus-

Bridge:
You tell me you miss me
And that you wanna see me
But actions speak louder than words
You tell me you're just really busy
I guess I'm never a priority
And you're trampling all over me

-Chorus-

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Not bad. I'm a little curious as to what this would actually sound like and what sort of music you'd play for this, but on a purely mechanical standpoint - pretty good. Some of your rhymes fall a little flat, especially in the beginning, but you rally back and I feel like you've done a good job of getting your point across in this piece. Well done.