A Bomb

I dont like this one, its an extended metaphor.

A Bomb

 

Love is a bomb.

At one moment you have these feelings,

then it turns into much more than that.

It starts out calm

and the next minute

it hits you.

 

This love,

everyone will feel it sometime in their lives

some with another person,

and some just with themselves.

Everybody has someone

that they will love.

 

It starts slow

and then it builds,

and builds,

and builds.

And then right before your eyes

it EXPLODES!

 

Love is hard to explain

unless you are the one experiencing it.

So I will leave it at this

and just tell you for now

Love is a bomb.

Reviews

[distefano 401]

this was really good. i have to say, you've gotten a lot better since that poem you wrote me in like 7th grade, lol.