My Life's Over

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MY LIFES OVER

 

I

don’t think you feel

what I feel

don’t think you see

what I see

there’s only one way that you and I

could ever be

 

I love you more

than you know

I love you more

than I show

baby you

and me

could last an eternity

 

 

I tell you everyday,

how much I feel,

how much I care

and every time

it turns to that goodbye kiss,

or a goodbye stare,

I need to know

do you love me or not?

I need to know

should this all just be dropped?

 

 

I want to know

I need to know

I have to know

how you feel

Before the flesh

before the skin

on my face

comes unpeeled

 

I live for you

I’d die for you

I’d bleed for you

I’d cry for you

 

I need to know if you care

I need to know

if my heat will be tarred.

 

 

I told you again

how much I feel how much I care

and once again

it turned to that goodbye kiss

and a goodbye stare

 

I can see now,

that its over

I can now feel

my life’s over

 

What’s in this world?

What’s left for me?

Is there still some hope?

That I cannot see?

 

Because I love you

cause I need you

and my poor heart

has been ripped in two

 

I can see now,

I can feel now

I hear now

 

my life’s over..

Reviews

[distefano 401]

i really like this one. it was good how you broke it up into really short lines; it emphasized each one. keep writing!

[Souls Set Aflame]

wow, this is really deep, i can feel the emotions coming out of the words, this is excellent writing, keep it up