rain

I am really bored and all I want is for it to rain right now enjoy :)

sitting in my room

the light shines through my window

I look out side and see the sun

but all I want is rain

 

I have nothing to do

I can't go out

nor think about anything else

but all I want is rain

 

the amber tree outside my window

it's leaves shining with gold

It's beauty blinds my eyes

but all I want is rain

 

as I sit here on my bedroom floor

as I hear the birds singing outside

and as I take in a slow, deep breath

I realize how lucky I am

 

but unless there are little droplets on my window

I will forever

                 and ever

                            and always

     want just rain

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

I got through this write that you do love RAIN much, well me too love Rain :) me too want the only one thing when i'm alone "JUST RAIN", loved your Imaginary, it's came from your heart but the thought're came from your soul... well penned write. It's totally an enjoyable write, those who read this piece can easily raise their will to get the drops of rain on their faces... i've even made some views of the rain when i was reading this piece. Great job, nice flow of ink.

[R.A. Youngblood]

I like your imagery! Like your feeding with the feeling of rain, just want rain, it makes you feel good, yeah, this is so relaxing write and i feel the same way.
I like your flow with that "but all I want is rain" in each stanza.
Thanks for sharing..Well done buddy! :D

[Uroš D. Stojanov..]

I feel the same way. I'm sitting here, tired and sleepy, there is nothing more I would like right now, then rain.

I really love this poem.

[Bao]

It's raining here where I am, the soft quiet kind. Will save some droplets for you :)