hope filled hills

I was napping in a park and this came to mind. Enjoy :)

A touch of light is what I see

when I walk through your hope filled hills

the beautiful green graze beneath my feet

I can taste the air of sweet morning dew

Children playing on the playground

their eyes full of innocence

the kind of innocence that can't be stolen

the innocence that stays in our hearts forever

I walk through the multicolored meadow 

I see the grass flow with the warm wind

every problem seems to have gone away

and all their is, is a smile on me face

I feel my blonde hair being swept away 

the sun's warmth on my shoulders

and all of my troubles being driven away 

for all I see is light in my eyes

As I walk along these hills on my way home

I notice that the sky has turned pink and dark blue

I see the clouds are walking away with the sun

for the sun is going to bed

I am sad that the sun has gone

but am happy that night is returning

and I know that nobody can hurt me

as I walk through the hope filled hills

Author's Note

gotta admit, I am very proud of myself for this one.
Hope y'all liked it :)

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

I really like this, I think that you did a great job with the imagery, because I could see it all in my head. Cool!

[Owlgirl]

Wow, that was yet again, an amazing and truly epic poem. I love the descriptions you used and the wording was awesome. Nice flow and it rings true with emotion that is truly quite sweet. It's not everyday that someone writes a truly happy-seeming poem. Outstanding.

[Crifa]

I'm not usually a fan of free verse but this one I liked great job