A Midnight Scribble

thoughts...

It's midnight
    and yet
         I can't sleep
            
             I have to rest
                      but still 
                           I want to weep
                                
                          Why at this time
                       you're not
               around?
      
           It is so quiet,
                 I can't hear
                               a sound.


How come I'm here, I'm just the same?
Why do I keep on calling your name?
What should be the best thing to do?
When can I walk along with you?

Author's Note

Shape poetry?

Music: These Dreams by Jim Croce

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

This beautiful piece of yours reminds me again of this timeless song

Once we were lovers
But some how things have changed
Now we're just lonely people
tryin' to forget each other's names

What came between us?
Maybe we were just too young to know
But now and then I feel the same
And sometimes at night I think
I hear you callin' my name
Mmm hmm hmm these dreams
They keep me goin' these days

Once we were lovers
But that was long ago
We lived together then
And now we do not even say hello

[one sky]

You know too much about songs. LOL. What's the title of that song?
Thanks.

[NeiL ArandA]

Its my favorite ... These Dreams by Jim Croce

[one sky]

Okay. Next destination: You Tube. Thanks!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You know in the dead of night is when loneliness fills our heads with so many questions. I get where you are coming from.

[one sky]

Thank you.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are most welcome.