LOVE

What's the truth?

                          Couple loveby Morinc



They say love's a triggered mood
Something like to deal
Love me back? I can't conclude
What you truly feel.

Hope you love me as I could
We both have to seal
Don't be fake, try to be nude
I wish we could heal.

Do not put in veil or hood
Try not to conceal
Show me truth, please don't be rude
You have to reveal.

I just wished to love you, dude
Do I have to kneel?
If you feel the same for good
Let us just be real.

Author's Note

Something I made as challenged by another writer. The format is 7-5-7-5/ ABAB throughout the poem.

Reviews

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I like how it flows and the message in it with easy to comprehend language and it is also impressive how it is a format 7-5-7-5/ ABAB.

[one sky]

Thank you S.

[Troy Henson]

I do like the structure and although offset still flowed well with great imagery.

Love a triggered mood? Yes of course it is but find the right person and let the love and the mood continue effortlessly.

Regards
Troy

[one sky]

Thanks, Troy. That idea came from a another writer.

[Troy Henson]

I love that....I too sometimes find inspiration in other writers and use phrases or ideas to develop something new. Keep it up.