CAN I SAY GOODBYE?

I have to say goodbye
I shouldn't make this longer
I have shed too much tears
Loving you is so much like
Holding a rose full of thorns
Now this makes me bleed.

Can I say goodbye?
I have to
But how?
I wish I could...

Author's Note

I wish I have done this before...

Reviews

[PurpleQuartz]

I can feel the pain of the heart in this! The emotion is writen amazingly. Great writing!

[Bluefire]

Like a drug that causes pain, yet you cannot for the life of you give it up.
Very well written interpretation of a one sided love, for if they loved you they would not hurt you.

[Praveeta]

Heartfelt piece.

"Loving you is so much like
Holding a rose full of thorns
Now this makes me bleed."

[one sky]

There's a kind of love that makes one walk in a rough road...or like holding a thorny rose.
Thanks for the visit, Praveeta. You are so kind.

[Praveeta]

You are welcome.