MY SMILE AT LAST

Those words from my most admired person... I will carry them in my heart wherever I am.

An angel fell from high above
As bright as sun and white as dove
His words are fine, the thoughts I have
Envoy of love, envoy of love.


He looked at me and said, "Let's fly.
I'll show you how, I'll show you why."
My fear was gone, I wasn't shy
No doubts of lie, no doubts of lie.


That angel took me from my place
And brought me to a higher space
The air I breathe, I was amazed
It kissed my face, it kissed my face.


And then he showed a looking glass
That thing he said, how good it was
I'd love to share the thought he has
As time will pass, as time will pass.


"And from this time you try  to smile
To face the world, walk every mile
Though your life seems a  shattered pile
Just smile awhile, just smile awhile.


To love oneself, it is a must
Just learn to build not hate but trust."
And so I tried, I've made it fast
My smile at last, my smile at last!










 

Author's Note

Inspired by Ms. Jewel's "Dancing In White" @ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Julie-Ward/1299908/

My first attempt to Monotetra form. I wish I won't fail.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Not really familiar with this form, I usually just wing it, your rhyming scheme is interesting and the sentiment certainly holds up, nicely' pen'd.

[one sky]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

A good rhyming poem...Thank you for penning...:)...................

[one sky]

Thanks to Ms. Jewel. After reading her piece, I searched on this form of poetry and made one.

Thank you, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)................

[Sasha]

Beautiful Writing !
Loved it !

[one sky]

Thank you for the visit!

[Sasha]

you are welcome ! :)