If you say goodbye Please hug me tight Until you feel the warmth of my body And you realize you still need My warmth My caress My love.
If you say goodbye Kiss me one more time Until you feel the love from my breath And you realize you still want My lips My body My soul.
If you say goodbye Whisper once again Those words you used to tell me For the last time Until you feel how you love to say those words For me For my happiness For ours...
This is really beautiful !!!...I could feel the emotion deeply..
You are a talented writer...you touched on the subject in a delicate manner.
I have the feeling you have a beautiful heart.
Scott
This was gorgeous and so very touching. Goodbyes are always sad it seems but you have come up with the perfect formula to alleviate some of that sadness. Very nicely penned.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you, Jack. I always believe in second chances.