IF YOU SAY GOODBYE

IF YOU SAY GOODBYE

A Chapter by one sky
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please don't...

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If you say goodbye
Please hug me tight
Until you feel the warmth of my body
And you realize you still need
My warmth
My caress
My love.

If you say goodbye
Kiss me one more time
Until you feel the love from my breath
And you realize you still want
My lips
My body
My soul.

If you say goodbye
Whisper once again
Those words you used to tell me
For the last time
Until you feel how you love to say those words
For me
For my happiness
For ours...

Because you still love me.


© 2014 one sky


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one sky

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This is really beautiful !!!...I could feel the emotion deeply..
You are a talented writer...you touched on the subject in a delicate manner.
I have the feeling you have a beautiful heart.
Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

one sky

10 Years Ago

Thank you for dropping by, Scott.
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

:)
S.......
This was gorgeous and so very touching. Goodbyes are always sad it seems but you have come up with the perfect formula to alleviate some of that sadness. Very nicely penned.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

one sky

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Jack. I always believe in second chances.
Jack...

10 Years Ago

You are very welcome. Your poem was wonderful.

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Added on December 27, 2013
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