FOOL IN THE RAIN

Am I a fool in the rain
Waiting for the heat
From those raindrops falling?

Am I a fool in the rain
Pretending to smile
And laugh, and yell
As the rain makes me wet and cold?

How fool I am, I know
For I believed in you
When you said I have to smile
I have to dance in the rain
Because I believed
That you will stand there beside me
To smile
To laugh
To dance.

But you're not around anymore
And now I am just a fool
Waiting
Hoping
Wishing
For something out of the question.

I'm just a fool in the rain...

Reviews

[Neon]

Well.. as you displayed yer name "Left by an angel" then it's sure that you've got a heart of an angel so, directly you ain't a fool in the pretty cold rain .. because angel's beauty always flourish more day by day in the rain .. even when an angel cries then her tears ain't only tears but diamonds ... and when they fall onto the ground .. all sands, sins and every pain removed from that ground.

If you do wait for someone standing into rain .. waiting for someone again and again then for others you seemed always a fool but the truth's that you ain't the fool because you don't give pain but do wait and waiting for someone is about loving that someone right from the depth of the heart ..

Very cool write, I liked the poem. You've a great impression of love .. on love. Theme's very realistic to capture the views of your poem. Keep on dear, Angel-Vengel.

[one sky]

Thank you!

[Scott Metro]

Sad...at times you were describing me..
This is very lovely...so much a fool..I think not...just someone with an open heart that the fool didn't cherish.
I like this a lot.
Scott

[one sky]

"at times you were describing me.." ? Do you also have memories about the rain? LOL
Thanks a lot.

[Scott Metro]

I do...
S.

[Sami Khalil]

A self degradation poem but one that is so realistic for us lovers and the sheep that follows blindly to their demise...Bravo

[one sky]

Indeed. Thanks a lot, SK.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...............