Life Goes On

as you said

"Give your smile to others", you said
So I'm remaining in the same posture
And facial expression
Since you left
Because you asked.

Life goes on
With or without you
Oh, I'm so sorry
I'm just a woman seeking for attention
That's what you think about me
But I have to smile
To show you
My life still goes on...

Reviews

[Scott Metro]

Strength in self..forging ahead...bravo.
Your idea flowed well..it is refreshing to not get tangled in metaphors all the time..although the metaphor has validity, too much too often leaves my head spinning..maybe I'm not smart enough to unravel a writing riddled with riddles...or just plain lazy..lol.
I like this...refreshing !
Scott

[one sky]

Thank you so much, S. Just a sort of vent.

[Scott Metro]

:)
S........

[☾Panda☽]

I know sometimes we must let go something and it's hard, but life goes on, you describe that very good in your poem,

Sincerely Panda

[one sky]

Thank you.

[Laura Harrison]

This is amazing :) thanks for sharing

[Neon]

Once again the pain of the poem ripped mah heart off .. you write from heart, may be your passed through much pain i got it through yer stuffs... this poem's emotional and really very memorable. Keeping a smile on the face even when ya're in the pain it's too tough to do but when you do then it's showed that how much ya love someone frm the heart to keep yer love happy ... and don't give any kinda pain to yer someone...

True love means if your in pain, you never show it on yer face but keep smile before the eyes of yer love/someone ... and if yer someone loves ya really from the heart or have some faith in ya then yer love/someone always grabs that pain and without asking you your someone always drinks yer pain and keep ya in the arms of flowers ... but if yer someone doesn't able to grab yer pain that's piercing you behind yer smile on the face then I don't think ... the someone has really have some faith in ya or love ya from the heart but the true one always grabs that pain ... even whether your really happy or not because there some kinda bonding always stands b/w the soul of two love making 'em one.

It's a painful piece, you gotta be cool, life's short and yeah, it goes on ... moves on always.
Keep writing.
May God Bless You dear, Angel-Vengel.

[one sky]

Thank you so much.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. One word : Awesome...:)..................

[one sky]

Thank you so much.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)..................