NEVER-NEVER LAND

NEVER-NEVER LAND

A Chapter by one sky
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I will hold you there

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I am so weird, I know I am
I dreamed of love, so farcical
Is this what they call infatuation
What shall I do with this emotion?

I always wanted to be with you
I want to see you, talk to you
You're like an angel in the sky
A star I couldn't hold here in my arm.

It's really hard to be in love
In this place called never-never land...


© 2013 one sky


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Again .. the pain and love floated together into the piece hand in hand. The color of red represented the beat of yer heart and the font of the words expressed the trend of yer love in a modern life.

If you're in love of someone and wish for finding a true love then call yourself weird .. then you are.
If you dreamed of love and run with emotions .. then you will.
If you wanted to be with yer love .. then you'll be in peaceful arms.
If you find hard to be in love and call the place 'Never-Never-land' .. then you're true to be in love...

... because you don't want fake love, you want the true one, you want to keep in arms, you want to sleep over the shoulder of clouds, want to see yourself in the sky flying like a bird and at last ... you just want to be what you are because you know who you are.. what you are, your a human and an angel.. and the angels and humans always make a true love from the heart.

What a heartfelt poem. Your stuffs're touching mah heart. Keep on dear, 'Angel-Vengel'.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

one sky

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Neon.
Neon

11 Years Ago

Cool, My pleasure to be on yer page dear, Angel-Pengel.



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Another of your pleasant writes...I love the way you say what you say.
A breath of fresh air. !!
Infatuations can be potent..difficult to overcome..a natural yearning to bond with someone that tickles your instincts.
Very well done.
Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

one sky

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Scott. I don't want to say this but sometimes I hate myself because of being absurd. It's.. read more
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

Don't hate yourself...I've had a few of them LOL...natural....human.
S.
Again .. the pain and love floated together into the piece hand in hand. The color of red represented the beat of yer heart and the font of the words expressed the trend of yer love in a modern life.

If you're in love of someone and wish for finding a true love then call yourself weird .. then you are.
If you dreamed of love and run with emotions .. then you will.
If you wanted to be with yer love .. then you'll be in peaceful arms.
If you find hard to be in love and call the place 'Never-Never-land' .. then you're true to be in love...

... because you don't want fake love, you want the true one, you want to keep in arms, you want to sleep over the shoulder of clouds, want to see yourself in the sky flying like a bird and at last ... you just want to be what you are because you know who you are.. what you are, your a human and an angel.. and the angels and humans always make a true love from the heart.

What a heartfelt poem. Your stuffs're touching mah heart. Keep on dear, 'Angel-Vengel'.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

one sky

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Neon.
Neon

11 Years Ago

Cool, My pleasure to be on yer page dear, Angel-Pengel.
You have summed it up marvelously about the possibilities and impossibilities in the never-never land(s)...Bravo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

one sky

11 Years Ago

Thank you. You're so diligent in reviewing.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

I felt some connection...You are welcome...:).................

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Added on November 3, 2013
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