IT'S RAINING HERE

You said to me that rain is good
So I believed in your every word
I tried so hard to love the rain
But why until now what I feel is pain?

When I met you I felt so glad
You brought me back my smile at last
But then why don't you make it long?
Now I  hear again that somber song.

It's raining here not in my place
But in my heart where I feel the ache
I want you to stay but it's like a dream
My heart cries more and it's raining here.

Reviews

[☾Panda☽]

I love the rain, I love the raindrops that are falling on the window, when I walk in the rain it gives me some rest...a nice peaceful poem, keep sharing


Sincerely Panda

[one sky]

Thank you, Panda. This was written more than a month ago when my mind was preoccupied with confusion. But now, I really know what the rain means...
Glad that you are one of the few who love the rain. Keep the good faith.

[☾Panda☽]

Thank you ;-)

[Neon]

I loved some cool lines .. .Here' we go...

It's raining here not in my place
But in my heart where I feel the ache

Cool, Loved the poem, very nice, emotions, pain, breaking heart right into rainy heart everything's cool. Keep on dear, Angel-Vengel.

[one sky]

Thank you so much, Neon.

[Sami Khalil]

A very sad write...Thank you for sharing...:)......................

[one sky]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..............