Together.....

Together.....

A Story by fotini
"

The people that trully love us are always there...!

"
It's a bitter sweet symphony....
Have you ever felt that you are listening to the right music?
She was feeling like that.The only person that really knew her,was gone.
And the music continued.
There were many people in the funeral.Everyone's dressed in black.They all seemed
sad.....maybe for this or for something entirely different.
There were many clouds on the sky.Probably it would rain.
She was listening to the words of the funeral,but she couldn't concentrate.
Everything irrelevant was on her mind.
She was so sure that if he was there with her he would laugh.He wouldn't have a choice.
So ironic...
But he wasn't there.He was only inside her heart...making her laugh,teasing her,
telling her the best stories he had heard....
And the rain begun.Like the time they were in a street in the middle of nowhere,
backpacking,and trying to find a ride,but in the end no one stopped.
It was amazing.They were so wet,but they couldn't stop laughing!
Now everything was different.
She was standing,feeling the rain on her skin,like he would do.
He always liked the rain!
And suddenly he was standing next to her.Smiling!
"Don't tell me you don't like my funeral?It has everything!The music that you are listening,
the rain that you are feeling and mostly you!"
"You are here?"
"In the flesh!Ok i'm joking!Don't worry, you are not loosing it!"
"But how can you be here?"
"Silly....i always have been here!Do you think i'll leave you now?"
"But you're dead...."
"No i'm not.I'll never be dead for you."
She started crying.
"I love you so much.....WHY YOU LEFT????How couldn't you fight more???"
"It was time.Don't feel sad,you know how much i love you.You think i'll abandon you?"
"No....YOU were always there."
"Like you were there for me.Always.You must never forget our place.
I'll always be there waiting....
And someday we'll be standing again with our backpacks under the rain.....
with everything as our destination."
He faded away.
At that point she couldn't even notice how wet she was.She found some red roses.
Everyone was staring at her.She didn't care.
She looked at the sky,winked at her best friend,she started laughing and through the roses
up in the air!With all the power she had,she screamed:
                         FOR YOU....MY FRIEND!!!
Now on the hill she was sitting alone,but she knew that he was sitting right next to her.
They were reading books.They were drinking coffee.They were looking at the stars.
Together.

© 2008 fotini


Author's Note

fotini
This is a small story that i came up with when listening to the song Bitter Sweet Symphony by The Verve.
I hope you'll like it and please ignore any grammar mistakes,because i'm sure there are many!!!!

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You wrote this while listening to The Verve??? WOW I guess I will have to listen to them more because I loved this!!! Your not that bad of a writer fotini . Matter of fact your pretty good. Your too hard on yourself.
Sweet and simple goes a long way.

Great write thanks for sharing.

Kelley

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is both true AND sweet....for indeed even when that someone special isn't physically present, the feeling of them 'being there' embraces our senses...

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Oh
you did it!!!
you finally painted my emotions with words...
you showed me the path to end the neverending dream
indeed bittersweet for many including me....

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

It's so sweet. Reminds me of a movie i saw once.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I'm Fotini and i'm 21! I'm a writer,but mostly a dreamer,who wants to change the world...or just to leave an impact! Ok,i know that this can't happen but as i said i'm a dreamer!!! Also i'm a little .. more..

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