darkness

...just try to see the stars...

why i can't breathe?

why is it so hard...?

i'm on my knees...i'm not able to handle it anymore

i hate it...

i'm alone,alone in the dark...

without someone to hold my hand

without someone to tell that everything's gonna be alright

i'm crying and crying and crying

and i hate my own weekness...

why i'm not strong?

strong enough to make it without the stupid cliches...

without that special person who would see the real me...

i'm on my knees...for yet another night

and i'm crying listening stupid love songs

alone...in a endless night

breathless...and with you on my mind

Author's Note

just something i came up with!

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

I can relate to that pain; sometimes I feel like I am being smothered or locked in a closet or dark place.. it is when I get really down. There are circumstances that cause this feeling around me (not a medical condition - yet) So many bad things have happened around me.. I almost feel like I wrote this myself... very good and many may relate to this... power of sadness almost as strong as the power of love. Thank you for sharing! If these are your true feelings.. believe me you are not alone.

[Emmaa]

very emotional and true
good job=]

[Akash]

great one
glad to notice that a burning passion erups in other hearts as well
extensive

[The DuchessPoet]

I really felt this ... I guess I'm kinda like you I'm a dreamer!
I wish I could hold your hand a wipe your tears away...
Don't be sad my friend... there is someone who is waiting to love you!!!

Very well done!
Excellent write!

Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem!

[Helena]

You penned your feeling so well. Heartfelt longing and pain
so tangiable in this. Good job!

~ Helena ~