The Heart of the Beast

I reach out

your hand

a cloud

my hand

the shroud

of ancient mystery

 

Can you make

the sound,

are you

the player,

is my every prayer

a deja vu,

your history

 

Recall for me

the time of lovers

love, my soul quivers

in the beast of my heart

 

The animal in us

reaches back to me

whispers in heartfelt she,

"our souls nevermore apart"

 

 

 

Robin

Reviews

[Periac]

pinch me for 'oh robin has real blood flowing through that intricate maze of clever veins......maybe i am late but i see a different direction in your writing as of late.....and i am enjoying it.....you still seem to hammer time doen the robin we know

The animal in us

reaches back to me

whispers in heartfelt she,

"our souls nevermore apart"



amazing

[Broken.]

awwww. adorable to the max (:

[C.T. Bailey]

Hey...of what I've read of your stuff...this is the best by far. 1st stanza is massive. I like this quite a bit. I noticed that you enjoy reflections upon deja vu...very artsy sentiments indeed. Nice job...kudos.

[Legion]

ah, romance. :) Favorite part had to do with the deja vu, but I think I may have said that once before.

[Emily B]

quiet and meditative and breathless
it speaks to me of two parts of the same whole

lovely writing

[Seriana]

Ahhhh, like a breath of fresh air. Wonderfully in sync Robin. I adore this piece. sometimes it just needs to be stripped to the bare bones and exposed, no? I will see what I can come up with for a counter. Give me some time. This is a fantastic challenge. :) Thank you for gracing us with your fabulous words!

[Poeticpiers]

A clever piece of poetic prose which touches a resonant chord in me