The Heart of the Beast

I reach out

your hand

a cloud

my hand

the shroud

of ancient mystery

 

Can you make

the sound,

are you

the player,

is my every prayer

a deja vu,

your history

 

Recall for me

the time of lovers

love, my soul quivers

in the beast of my heart

 

The animal in us

reaches back to me

whispers in heartfelt she,

"our souls nevermore apart"

 

 

 

Robin

Reviews

[Periac]

pinch me for 'oh robin has real blood flowing through that intricate maze of clever veins......maybe i am late but i see a different direction in your writing as of late.....and i am enjoying it.....you still seem to hammer time doen the robin we know

The animal in us

reaches back to me

whispers in heartfelt she,

"our souls nevermore apart"



amazing

[Periac]

still enjoying this

[THE LOST ROSE]

WOW! Such power in such few words. What a gift. Thank you for creating and sharing. I don't want to highlight the poem but the ending was a smack and felt like I came to the end of a ride. great job. I look forward to returning. I hope you accept my invite as a friend. I love your work.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Very creative and talented stuff. Your words are smooth and full of orginality. You shared a merging of two hearts as one in the way you strung your words together. And deja vu, on a recorder is just keeps playing again anew.

Excellent write.

[Angel's Lady]

Recall for me
the time of lovers
love, my soul quivers
in the beast of my heart

Indeed The Heart of the Beast....

[darkgurl]

This is a most wonderful write here

"The animal in us
reaches back to me
whispers in heartfelt she,
"our souls nevermore apart"

I espceially like these lines, this wriet is very profound well written....Kim

*kapow*

until now I am still jealous of your craft.

Keep at it, I always enjoy having a writer to look up to, you are one of them.

[Dani California]

This is an interesting write Robin.. I am reading more than a romance here. Perhaps it's just me, but I read more about 'time' than anything else. Connecting the past with now, history.... repeats? Our human nature as it relates to our spirituality. But, like I said.. that might just be my off center interpretation.

Either way, I love it. It's very gentle... almost soothing. I felt as though I were adrift as I read.. :)

[lilain]

There is a beautiful simplicity in this poem, with a profound statement. Well penned, Robin!

[Pink Poison]

This poem captures the mystical quality of love while still touching on the corporeal "animal" in each of us. Very nice.