Her Name Isn't Sanity

Her Name Isn’t Sanity

 

 

the moment I saw you

I knew I’d been alive forever

I felt my darkness

swirling and swelling

rising, shadows surfacing

through a bitter edged crust

of pure, unbridled power

with a touch of hostility

for “spice” and Style

 

the moment I saw you

I felt time distort

before you

and colors bled

like the bloodletting of my illusions.

My dreams unfolded you further

with wanton lack of regard for

…anything

what are words

but non sense NOW

 

the moment I saw you

I became pure

EVIL

pure masculine

pure destroyer

pure warrior

pure Devil

pure Phallus

my single duty

ever to conquer YOU

fully, completely

 

When I awakened

my face was resting

peacefully in the bliss of your bosom

So soft I may have even wept

uncontrollably, awkwardly

in male ego destroying

soul embarrassing girly sobs,

But you were there

as I awoke

my comfort and Ambrosia?

 

And indeed, the only thought

possible in my head

other than ravishing you again was,

“Sanity is so overrated”

 

 

 

Robin

 

 

 

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

the moment I saw you
I felt time distort -- OMG, I love this line!

Actually, Robin, I think you have a masterpiece on your hands! This is amazing, dear friend, and I absolutely love it! Yum! I do believe this is going in my Favorites! Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of writing with the rest of us mere mortals! Love, love, LOVE it!

[Gandré]

great job, Robin. Love its structure, how you make your woman from your dream the one you need. Another favorite of yours.

[C.T. Bailey]

This is fabulous. "and colors bled, like the bloodletting of my illusions"...just brilliant. I am not usually one for love poetry...but this is written in such an honest an unencumbered fashion, it was an irresistable read. Very nicely done.
Todd

[Mercury Mirrors]

always such vivid description and passion in your writing o_O its awesome!! :D.