Sformtran

Sformtran

 

 

“So’d” when I saw

solid was not

structures had fallen

for months prior

many meaningful knowings

transcended concept

and wishful thinking

transformed into reality

pain moved into vocalized

sounds like teen spirit

Shamen guides flourished

at the ready quickening

cells repair distressed

the Din of DIS

and the delusion of Dose

realization brought instantaneous

to smooth harmonic

vessel sacred

manifest as a common

denominator

in Humanity Soup

“The Down”

and now I lay me

in this surrender

and blossom dwells

in rainbow innocence

breathe of purification

in new life

from old self

reintegrating on each exhale

Blessed Be

 

 

 

Robin

 

 

Reviews

[Dani California]

I'm happy to be reading you again,
Robin dear..

I've missed a beat.. yours!

It looks like maybe you've been
hanging out with..
self discovery,
awareness,
answer/truth seeking?
Ongoing..
everchanging...
out with the old
in with the new??

Is that where you've been my lovely friend?

We've missed you.

[Mick Parsons]

Sorry for the delay in reading...

it runs pretty well... very smooth and consistent with work of yours I read over the summer.

I am curious about your take on form, though. How do you decide what form (visually) your poems take?

[Janice Ann]

Well, I am glad to see you writing again doll! I love the last few lines of this...once again your never fail to amaze!
Love,
Janice

[Emily B]

I'm a little out of breath running through all those words. Amazing journey.

[~amanda~]

very peaceful. i feel like i should be doing yoga and listening to you read this.. so powerful!

thank you for sharing

[Legion]

Perhaps you should transform that into sight without sound. What a wonderful world.

you have the beat, the form, and the whole jive swimming in my head... Robin, we need drums when we read your piece. It has funk and depth

And that is the best part,

Making depth funkeeh :)

I am still a nerd, so I cannot seem to make it sound good.

But you have the ability to transcend words through a form that grows vast. This makes you a wonderful writer.

A wonderful piece.

[Broken.]

I like this, its has a very soft yet powerful cling to it.
Something that would make someone like me vote for you in an election..
Sorry if that's a bit on the random side, but this is a clear sword busting through those brick walls!!

Keep em coming

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Oh yes, Dis understands this...me thinks.
Sid

[Seriana]

"and wishful thinking transformed into reality"....how true.
and "many meaningful concepts transcended knowings" ---to the blind we become....impervious to the touch of truth.

It is so nice to see your words again. What does it take to rearrange the letters to truly become transformed? Awesome piece Robin. :)