Shaolin CIRCLE of LOVE

cHINESE mYSTICAL aRTS

 

 

Shaolin CIRCLE of LOVE

 

 

red to your green

green to my red

 

I’ll walk with you

so Far East

we’ll draw the West

and if dark clouds

should bow us fearly

and we then choose

to revel in the Dullness

We’ll simply slowly

plummet sullen

lowly summit…

 

green to my red

red  to your green

 

are you the most

fascinated I’ve ever

been, I mean,

it’s not “sheen”

with you at all,

 

You’re just REAL

 

And I seem ALL OVER THE PLACE

 

like the outer space

of your GALAXY

I embrace you

you compose me

yet I am lost

in my self for NOW

 

Always this thing

I got going with NOW

Why can’t I bring

IT, ME, TIME, US

together NOW?  ?      ?

 

if I EVER wrote you a poem

to bring your sexy back

(and ya it didn’t leave…8-P)

YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE!

and that is as sexy as you’ll ever be…

 

KERPOW!

 

 

 

Robin

Reviews

[Dani California]

I see you've settled down a bit...
lol..

Robin,
this is either speaking to the object
of your affections...
or world peace...
too wrapped up in "me" to
care about "us"....
isn't that how it seems to go
... which is why it's like climbing
the tallest mountain in a pair of
flip flops to bring healing amongst
people..

anywho...
or you are combining them into
"one".. :)

I like that theory, the best.

However you intended it,
it's ... as always...
awesome!

mind food ... to play with...
ponder.... twist around on my
fork for awhile .....

[Periac]

oh dark prince of cunning imagery whoring......this is awesome...the whole style of the first section was written wonderfully.....im jealous at it content....and for this i add it so i can plagerize it and make millions....great job yo!

[ElJays Nicholas]

To merge realities, to unite worlds!! You are doing it now, my friend. This poem is a lesson: We are more than we think, and we think less than we are. That's why some of us feel like hell more than others.....

[Broken.]

Lmao!!
Okay I will be laughing at this for the next week or so ^_^

I very much enjoyed reading this haha. Its made me smile for today

[Hedra Helix]

ohhh, haha yep;)

[Hedra Helix]

yep sexy, slap eros and a black cover on some loveletters, im telling you. Oooo oo or write some erotica! omg how i love well written erotica, tangent! haha, nice dude, I like when you go simple and perfectly sprinkle on the salt. accessable thats where its all at. lets the rhyme mime on the tongue, so we can read the dance in the trance.

[Spat Queen]

That's the most romantic poem I've ever read. I didn't want it to end.

[Janice Ann]

Who is your muse or is there a great part that I am missing! I loved this...As usual! Always give me something to think about Robin! Always, and I love it!

Janice Ann

I'm leaving, off to seek another bottle of Black Label and a couple cans of soda water, and ice cubes...

Whiskey with soda goes well cold

Why? Because here is another amazing piece you wrote, and it got me spinning... And I am reading it again, only because I truly enjoy your pieces.

And it leaves further insights, I will want to write pieces like yours some day.

Off to another glass, "cheers buddy"

[Wildfleour]

I have to say that I agree so much with Dani's comments.

I always find your work "mind food" - this was one tasty meal.

[Kaleidoscope Apocalypse]

I really like this piece.

It has an ounce of humor, and a dash of romanticism that I think mixed quite well..

Nice write!