Lara I Love Alaura

For Lara Gandre

 

Lara I Love Alaura

 

 

 

Lara, I love Alaura

who is not yet. I will

will her to me, to BE.

It’ll take Another

to make her my <3

I pray for this,

patiently.

 

 

God wills She

has thy mystery to me

you have/are “presence”

without dimensions,

hesitations percolate

rapidly as I consider

thoughts nebulized

into their sensing essence.

 

 

Where you bring me

every time I venture

on the sameness of you,

there is none,

quite, “Quite”

 

 

If you were a bird

I would sing your name

to call my Alaura

here to my delight!

How can I shift

Tone and Spirit,

make concept

Love Bones…

I near it

with knowing

You.

 

 

I could go on

and on, and Do….

I needed You

to know this

way I have

of enduring

endearing Truth.

 

 

Ultimate Truth is where

your flowing leads me Fara

even making corny words up

to express my loving kindness Lara…

 

 

 

 

 

 

Robin

 

 

 

Author's Note

I love the name " Alaura " and would like to name my first daughter so...:)

Reviews

[Dani California]

This is lovely Robin!

While reading I sang it,
and it sounds wonderful
as a song!

First stanza -- chorus. :):)

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Ok, and as the wonderful poem that it is:

"I could go on
and on, and Do�.
I needed You
to know this
way I have
of enduring
endearing Truth."

I particularly liked this stanza.
It's indeed.. endearing.


You rock!
But, I've already said that. :):)

[Legion]

Bet she loved that. :) Well done. How hard is it to catch a nebula I wonder? ;)

[Periac]

thats a jinx and now you will have a boy....and his name will be???

loved this piece there where many enjoyed lines that itched in my eyes...but this stands out as wonderful
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God wills She




has thy mystery to me


you have/are “presence”( love this Robin )

without dimensions,
hesitations percolate
rapidly as I consider
thoughts nebulized
into their sensing essence

[Windy]

I think the name Alaura is a beautiful name and I hope you have that daughter someday. Children are so precious and when she is old enough you can show her this so she knows how much she was wanted even before she "was". Good job Robin. ;)

[wizthom]

here you are just being you mystical ,,but it fits ur icon,
my friend u make me lol with ur ever changeing moods,,wms

[wizthom]

here you are just being you mystical ,,but it fits ur icon,
my friend u make me lol with ur ever changeing moods,,wms

[Wildfleour]

This piece created a lovely movement of words as I read it out loud.

I did a Google search on "Alaura"............you should too! ;)

[Gandré]

Now my friend, this is a magnificient word play. And all your wishes fly free and restless beneath the colorful Pacific Ocean sky...You write like everyone wants this wish within a truth to be desired, yet not knowing... finding trouble in paradise... this truth seeking is an unfathomable depth, no way back.