Poet's Love
A Poem by
Cardinal Robin
re-post...about the love we have for each other's use of words
Poet’s Love
if I could say
a single word
to you
would think
a single word
untrue
so hard I strive
creative to
parlay
subtle words are
not enough
today
when every single
diamond out
of coal
will look us in
the eye
for soul
my heart will ever
warm you
next to me
my word for love
remains your
ecstasy
foreshadow
© 2008 Cardinal Robin
Reviews
I like the simplicity of the poem :) Beautifully written:D
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Beautiful.
Truly beautiful!
^_^
Posted 16 Years Ago
Beautiful.
Truly beautiful!
^_^
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Exquisite work. The simplicity of your words give it life.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Exquisite work. The simplicity of your words give it life.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
brilliant write ,u have a way of taking none sense,
shaping it into clever sense,of inspiration,images views ,while still leaving room to wonder what did i just read,,peace wizthom
Posted 16 Years Ago
brilliant write ,u have a way of taking none sense,
shaping it into clever sense,of inspiration,images views ,while still leaving room to wonder what did i just read,,peace wizthom
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Good job. I really liked this. Lots of feeling and I love the way you wrote it, it made me stop and really think about what I was reading. Thanks for another great read. ;)
Posted 16 Years Ago
Good job. I really liked this. Lots of feeling and I love the way you wrote it, it made me stop and really think about what I was reading. Thanks for another great read. ;)
this hurricane-velocity message went straight to my heart. Like the brevity and humbleness about it.
Posted 16 Years Ago
this hurricane-velocity message went straight to my heart. Like the brevity and humbleness about it.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Write on.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Write on.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on July 1, 2008
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