This is great! The notion of watching paint dry and being in your own world then POW! there she is - reminds me of a song by Marcy Playground called 'Sex and Candy'. There is a similar story line without the direct fruit references. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Marvelous flow. Oh, to hear you perform - record it and youtube it for us will ya, pretty, pretty, please with sugar and a cherry on top?
Light,
Siddartha
How'd I miss this? Fabulous Robin! I love it. :) I agree with Sid about the song, totally reminds me of that. Except maybe a beat faster.
Pears are delicious! My favorite. What a giddy, goofy, sensual write. If all of those things can be together, they were in my mind. Great job!
As I read this I felt the wonderful rhythm of Bob Dylan with all the irony and cutting that implies. Here you have a montage of cheap come ons elevated to art by a deft and skillful hand. You put this together well, sexy without being obvious. This is a great poem.
This is great! The notion of watching paint dry and being in your own world then POW! there she is - reminds me of a song by Marcy Playground called 'Sex and Candy'. There is a similar story line without the direct fruit references. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Marvelous flow. Oh, to hear you perform - record it and youtube it for us will ya, pretty, pretty, please with sugar and a cherry on top?
Light,
Siddartha
Hmm, creatively insane! I know only anaphasic, which is related to the stage of mitosis known as anaphasemitosis! It simply say, you are lifting her derriere with your palms. Briliant ending. Loved it. And, all sort of apples.