Raw Bare Hills

Raw Bare Hills

A Poem by Cardinal Robin

 

Raw Bare Hills

 

 

 

I want to be as close to you

as the tiny hairs on your arms

and run across your raw hills

like bare grasses under

sizzling sunbeams

taking their high torque

drift curving cutting

no corners in a snap

rather warming on you

a cool cat in your lap

 

Feel my lightness

wisps of flirtation

puff your skin through my

cold wet nose

Feel my deep inner heat

Hear my purr ROAR like

your inner thigh thunder

in moments cherished

of visionary Nature!

 

 

 

 

Robin

 

© 2008 Cardinal Robin


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another sweet one.
I liked "a cool cat in your lap" and "Feel my lightness". A nice way to end it, to make it all visionary adventure. Who 'd say. :) be well. Gandre.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

stark images, jerking rhythms, sensuous, and that tantalizing inner thigh thunder!!
Excellent!

CM

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I like this, very well written.

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

psssttt!!!! this is my favorite. ;-)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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