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Psyche Deli BEAT!

Psyche Deli BEAT!

A Poem by Cardinal Robin

 

 

Psyche Deli Beat

 

 

 

formless essence found in

hollow body grounding

and open mindfulness

not easy but balanced

with least focal, regional

tension, resistance

one need not enter

into needy contemplation rather

compensation minimized,

yea surrendered...ssshhhhhhhh....

the ancient Host…

 

 

it all begins with nothing

no thing,

then, “something which is not a thing”

the original substance, Alpha, Origin,

Will,

not a thing yet something substance,

first thing, and from there

you get the first something

 

to put it another way

there is this instant, this moment,

the present, here, now

this is it

not that was it, not it will be

nor what will it

BE “It” IS

BE IS

Be At

 

The Bees are at the beats because they’re brats!

Is at be it?

IT beats IT is

Be IT Be

Be “that’s it!”

Easy is that

That BE easy

easy be

be   be     Be       bE            BE

BEAT!

 

*gesture taking out your heart

and throwing it like a boomerang

and about when a real one would make its arc

and return…you gesture catching it in a closed fist

when you open your hand in a fanfare, like an illusionist…there is no heart!

there is nothing, all has vanished

except the BEAT!*

 

 

Robin

© 2008 Cardinal Robin


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There is much to this writing to be considered in terms of analygy, this is.. psychedelic beat in words
and promotes all the twists and turns to what identifies the swirling effect in motion, at the same
time encorporating the concept of life's origin - which in turns takes the reader back to the beginning
of time in pondering notions.. what is it to be? to in essence believe- because in many ways

it boils down to belief because such defines and indivisual- this writing in ways has to be analyzed
in order to comprehend the full depth of what the author is initiating-your words shift directions
the way a kelidescope of calligraphy would present itself..nice job at drawing reader to contemplation

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I like this write, this i wonderful, "it all begins with nothing no thing, then, "something which is not a thing"
Love these lines this is wonderful well written.


Posted 16 Years Ago


Remarkable write, moving like music!!! Love the flow and rhythm of your words, dancing down line by line!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is much to this writing to be considered in terms of analygy, this is.. psychedelic beat in words
and promotes all the twists and turns to what identifies the swirling effect in motion, at the same
time encorporating the concept of life's origin - which in turns takes the reader back to the beginning
of time in pondering notions.. what is it to be? to in essence believe- because in many ways

it boils down to belief because such defines and indivisual- this writing in ways has to be analyzed
in order to comprehend the full depth of what the author is initiating-your words shift directions
the way a kelidescope of calligraphy would present itself..nice job at drawing reader to contemplation

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

My head hurts! ;) I'm with Legion on this one, I'd love to hear this spoken. Captivating and precise Robin. The alliteration is dripped here and there, and I've always loved that about your writing. Little bits and pieces of intricate depth that often is missed upon first reads. I have to read these several times before my reviews, because each time I pick up something new. Wonderful write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The beat of soul....

You hold my heart in your hand....
or do you...

perhaps you hold my soul in your hand...
that which cannot be seen, but only heard,
silently.

yesterday doesn't exist
and tomorrow is today....

so please ...
if it is with my soul you shall play...

do it NOW,
so I can BEAT you at your own game.

Now open your hand and see if you can hear me.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Shakespeare couldn't be prouder. Of course, his "to be or not to be" was probably eaiser to write. LOL Interesting piece. Would like to hear it spoken sometime.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

as mythopoetic as ever meaning full of metaphoric words that takes the mind on a joy ride with enigmas ,
as the sights of the mind..i love it when u take words to do magical things with them ,as a child looking in
at a Christmas display window with this writing i am in aw.be beat u know when i read ur writing i wanna jump into the words and create where u left off..just to see if it truly a one person write,,peace wizthom

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I am hovering this morning on the verge of words. I feel them coming like the summer rain heavy and ominous. They will pour from my heart in their own time.

May be there will be something come as nice as this.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You never cease to amaze me. Hey, I guess that makes you amazing! Great write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very nice.
Again, great flow.
I could actually feel the beat in this.
And I love the title, too!
Very original!

Well done!



Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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