Onion Skin

re-post...my preconception of a revolution...

 

 

Onion Skin

 

I’d love to have

a revolution of being

of rhythm, balance,

and ambiance

 

                   an emanation of blessings

in every intention       spanning broad invention

initiated            grounded         

    healing                             clearing

settling        unsophisticated

easing into     mind    body   calmsomme

 

subtle pool of receptive

and vault impermeable selective

dissolving in osmosis

of impermanent timelessness

 

sleep without dreaming

open your eyes pass through

a narrowing tunnel

and through a darkness whole

 

Awaken on the other side

and discover your better

not half as lonely

as you were before my friend,

 

Truly and Yes he knows

he has walked in your shoes

 

Welcome back, Dear Friend!

 

 

 

 

Robin

Reviews

[Periac]

viva la robin.....or revolution.....
...actually...your work always throws me through a lyrical wonderland....and well my question to you isabout this paragraph..
"Awaken on the other side
and discover your better
not half as lonely
as you were before my friend"
I love it but, it kinda brings me up for air...a small taste of normalcy in your bag of tongue jingles....was it planned this way?
it just caught me off guard that is all....great write