A far fell Star

re-post of my first sonnet...about 4 weeks ago

 

A far fell Star

 

When fickle world resolves your day in night

and darkness fills creation dulling day

When a single Star might bring pains to light

and banishment of joy will fall away

My Love I am just as I was since birth

Innocence Lost was not my broken chain

If I could break These bonds to free the Earth

and Love of Faith could lift thy smile again

My heart with thee will fill the books of Lore

My Hope and Charity shall pale chagrin

My Shooting Star eclipses Loves of Yore

Embraces all despair and Angels grin

If only One Kind Star arose and fell

My Love would kindle thee tonight, and well

 

 

 

 

foreshadow

Reviews

[Dani California]

Lovely! Just lovely!
I love your variation!

I just love it....

Tis a bit of a bore to stay in one place for too long,
things get rather....
stale.
don't you agree my friend? ;)

"If I could break These bonds to free the Earth
and Love of Faith could lift thy smile again
My heart with thee will fill the books of Lore
My Hope and Charity shall pale chagrin"

Beautiful! :)

[Kaleidoscope Apocalypse]

This is quite an amazing piece!

It is simply, and yet profoundly, appealing.

Oh, how I enjoyed reading it from beginning to end. It was beautiful!