evolution

just my belief.....

death of the flesh -

part of the human plight,

which emancipates the soul,

launching the spirit into flight.

then the "truth" is revealed

to the all seeing eye

and the knowledge we each find

shall one day be combined.

the fabrics of our tapestries

are, at last, intertwined.

as all parts become one,

life's jigsaw puzzle undone.

as enlightenment shines forth

like the glow of our sun.

Reviews

[Moflo]

The pacing and rhymes of this piece are great. It was a fun read, very catchy! Great work.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Beautiful!
So clear,
the enlightment
the way you lay out your wisdom leaves me in awe!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Very intriguing write! We are evolving... finding ourselves, -is a constant journey, never to be stagnant.. (if we were, then our dreams would die).. dreams are part of who we are, and that would be a tragedy if we stopped believing-stopped evolving... It would be "Icing on the cake" to finally put the pieces of the jigsaw puzzle together, finally finding the truth of ourselves. Nicely Done!