Have I found love

Have I found love

A Poem by Mr.Commentator
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This I wrote when I was very sad and droopy

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Wut is happy?
Wut is sad?
Wut is love?
I can not find the meaning of wuts above
The lies they tell from sea to sea just cant make me believe
You say youve found love but when you broke up you know your just not enough
What keeps you going?
What keeps you strong?
Wut keeps you aware
is it the goals?
The fight ,the mystery ?
The willing to keep moving,?
They say its your soul I
say  love
That may be my emotions
That might be my heart
It might be my soul
It might just be me
I dont know
Do I know my true true love
Is she still to have been met
If I know her does she know me
If she knows me do i know her
Have I found love?

© 2011 Mr.Commentator


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Mr.Commentator
This is my best poem so far, be ready for more :D

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I like this, it's cute!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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