The hidden effort of pain

This poem I do not know what it is about, I made it in class one day when I was bored, please feel free to put a review

The sky is blue
The ocean is blue
Blood is dark red
As is code red
As the thoughts run my head
I wonder if ill ever be ahead
I care and I care but it never gets through
Will it ever amount to the effort
Will it ever amount to the pain
The I have pain i have suffered once again

Author's Note

Please help me on this , this is my first poem on here

Reviews

[Wonderful Letdown]

Besides some grammatical/punctuation problems....you did a good job. I like it. You might not understand it, but others do. To me, it paints a picture of no matter how much you care, you begin to wonder if it's worth it with all the pain involved. I also like the little dark element you have at the beginning, it's kind of cool how you wrote it as a fact so that the later bits feel as if what you're saying is as true as how "the sky is blue." Good job!!