she

No, she didn’t.

But he did.

 

No she didn’t want to

But he did.

 

No it wasn’t her party

But it was his.

 

No she didn’t bring the alcohol,

But he did.

 

No she wasn’t conscious

But he was.

 

No she didn’t want to take part in it.

But he did.

 

No she wasn’t awake

But he was

 

It wasn’t her car

But it was his.

 

She wasn’t driving

But he was

 

She didn’t kill them

He did.

 

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

This is very good and I wish more would read this outside of WC. I value a poem that teaches a lesson as this one.

Good job! Write on!

[~angelalala~]

i really like this poem. very interesting dark subject. simple words, yet powerful in the story its telling. i think if you cleaned it up a little, corrected some spelling, it would be even more powerful. very good.