his death

his death

A Poem by Jorge Ramos

The rain falls slowly.

the girls tears fall like the rain

her soul was destroyed

© 2008 Jorge Ramos


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This is a good start but I think if you were to expand it a little it could be something really great.
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Jorge Ramos
Jorge Ramos

Stuart, FL



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