Climb to the moon.

Climb to the moon.

A Poem by Jorge Ramos
"

will you?

"

Lets Climb to the moon

together, you and I

so we can be at peace

from the worlds wachfull eye.

 

why dont we climb to the moon

using our neighbors ladder,

lets pull it out  quietly and carfuly

and lets hope it doesnt shatter.

 

yes climb to the moon

with me

and together you will see

that it was ment to be

 

climb to the moon

Just you and me.

© 2008 Jorge Ramos


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Aw I really liked this!! I like the first stanza the best because the rhyming was really good!! Great job!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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