My Valentine

My Valentine

A Poem by Jorge Ramos
"

it hurts.

"

 

Valentines day.

 

 

I understand

I understand that I was wrong

I understand that they were right

I understand that their happy

 

I regret what I said

I regret what I did

Both to them

And to me.

 

I will help

I will help them

By getting together

And by being together

But it still hurts.

A lot.

 

I wont tell them that.

Because I want them to be happy.

Together.

 

Hopefully it will work out.

 

But once again.

I am alone.

 

On Valentines Day.

© 2008 Jorge Ramos


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aww that's really sad. i liked the short lines and the use of repetition. nice write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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