Rain

Rain

Outside the windows,

A breath beyond the grasp;

Gazed upon by mountains.

Of  solitude impregnated in silence.

Rain , they say ,

Washes out.

Rain pours on ,

And on.

An embrace beckoning ,

But never  receiving.

Senses strive to dissolve,

For once and ever.

Cold refuse to penetrate,

To the longing marrow.

Reviews

[Max_E_Stone]

Your use of words here is wonderful. You put feeling to the weather, awesome!

[FictionOfTheMind]

I actually really like this. :)
It is very detailed and I like your use of vocabulary!

[Penlady]

A rainy day draws one in, as you have with these wonderful visions.

[Kuhr Gred]

:) that's why i love rain ;)

[Leslie Philibert]

Enjoy the way you give new life to a traditional theme, especially enjoyed the last two lines, good work.

[olla]

geeze.. we just had two weeks of rain non stop.. it is hard to find the poetic in the flood.. but you have captured it well..

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. you're a very gifted poet ...