RUN

running away

Run

Fast, far, don’t look back

Pursuit is hot

Track is long

Run

Don’t dare to stop

Forget your tiredness

Ache in your limbs

Run

Stalker is not out

But within

Outrun if you can

Run

Away and away

From everything

Within and without……

Author's Note

plz let me know what you think of this. honest. needs feedback for support

Reviews

[Kuhr Gred]

.. i feel you're singing in this poem.. love this.. keep it up ;)

[K.C. Zbryk]

Trying to escape the overly critical self analyst? We can be out worst judges and greatest adversaries, all rolled into one. I love how you captured an idea so vast in so few lines. Great poetry.

[paul]

this poem has an action like excitement to it. some people lead such lives.
i like the inside out logic of the third stanza. and the simple excellence of the third

[olla]

well done.. I have felt this need to run..

[Emily B]

your identity captured my imagination and I had to see what kind of poet you might be

glad to meet you

[rjrodriguez]

This was a good read. Now I want to run. haha :)

[closed..acct]

I like this, i think you expressed yourself very well.
You get the point across. Nice write!