Empty

Empty

A Poem by (Super) Heroes Never Die

Do you not understand 
How empty you've made me?
Do you not see
That you've taken my lungs?
Sometimes I feel 
Like they aren't even there.
I lost the ability to live;
You've taken my life
Along with my heart.
I hurt looking at you
God, why did you make him so handsome?
Why couldn't he have stayed mine? 

© 2012 (Super) Heroes Never Die


Author's Note

(Super) Heroes Never Die
Its been a month since I said goodbye to you. Most of the time, I don't regret it.

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This is a nicely done lament. You showed how the power of loss can really, physically effect a person.

I loved the last two lines. Perfect :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really like this poetry


Posted 11 Years Ago



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