Undertow

Undertow

A Poem by (Super) Heroes Never Die
"

Well.. this is how I feel at the moment. "

You held every chance in your fingers

And my heart in the palm of your hands

Your angel's face so full of promises

Your eyes devoid of doubt

Oh, how I loved you then;

One turn of the moon has gone

How do you think of me now?

My heart still bears the scars

Of a once thriving existance

Where all I needed was to know

I was all the beauty  

You saw in your world,

That I was your world.

Time slips through my fingertips

Like every chance you took for granted

Look beyond the glossy surface

To the torrent current below

Beware the gorgeous undertow

All of you who wish to swim.

<3 

© 2012 (Super) Heroes Never Die


Author's Note

(Super) Heroes Never Die
Dear Steven.. I love you. Im sorry things got to be this way. I just wanted you to love me the way I loved you.

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This was so good. I totally know how you felt/are feeling. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love this, so good. Especially loved the last two lines. Excellent work. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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