Just A Spark

I gaze at you

Under dark lashes

And false pretenses

It's finally time

For me to leave this town

Why don't you take a chance

And come with me?

Don't think about her

And what you have,

Think of me

And what we could.

We've got the spark,

So let's start a fire

And burn this whole place

To the ground.

Author's Note

Just something simple :P
I'll edit later.

Reviews

[Ashley.M.E]

it's a nice little poem
i'm sure this line
And what we could.
should end with be
and what we could (be)
other wise it doesn't make as much since...

[ChristianM]

I thought it was edgy and heartfelt. I liked how you built it up towards the last line.
And burn this whole place to the ground
Very cool poem, and I'm sure all of us have felt this way about someone just out of reach.