Questions

Poem about my questions on Christianity.

Questions swirl

Inside my head

A hurricane

Of blood and hate

Of love and joy

Of X’s and O’s

Of do’s and don’ts

Walk this path

And turn your back on that

Hold your head high

And don’t look down

Watch your tongue

Inspect your thoughts

I want to have fun

I want to live life

But how can I do that

And still live through You?

Time to party

Time to pray

Time to dance

And time to serve

Chose one

Over the other

I’m in love with both sides

The temptation

The desire

Or

The eternity

The Lord?

How I do be strong?

How do I say no?

How do I say yes?

Without disobeying Your will?

Author's Note

Not finished yet. wanna add another stanza to the end, but tell me what you think so far :P

Reviews

[Domo]

Certainly full of numerous questions that's for sure. You face too many questions that are incapable to answer, and swirling them all into one thought makes more questions, but in the end, no question will be answered with its final answer, for we always change the way the question should be answered.
Overall, this write is good, because it produces us to have questions, too, and that is how the writer is supposed to connect to their readers, by making them be in the same predicament.
Good job, Chey.
~D♥m♥~

[deeps]

AWESOME! I like this one alot. The last four lines are wonderful. Here's a thought for you. Why don't you sum up the last verse you want to add by answering those questions. Just a random thought. I like this Alot.

[William Fields Issac]

It is a great poem and raise the questions many people ask. The answer lies in God's word. He has given us everything we need to live a life for Him. The only way to answer these questions is to ask God tom open your heart to the answer. A friend once told me that there are times he wants to love both sides and no matter what he did he would continue to ride the fence. He said he found his solution by telling the truth. He said "God I don't want to serve you, I don't want to live for you. But I want to want to." he asked God to change his heart first than to answer the questions. Once your heart is changed than the rest will make sense. If you want further advice feel free to request my friendship and send me a message. I would love to answer your questions