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First peom in forever!! enjoy and review

Kiss my cold, pink lips

Watch the stars fall from the sky

Catch one in your palm

 

Hold your breath tonight

Put your arms around me and

Never let me go.

 

Look into my eyes

As I gaze right into yours

Can you see my soul?

 

We have lost the world

Now its only you and me

Wow, I love you so.

Reviews

[Domo]

It is as Destinee stated, it can be separated into numerous poems, and still hold the meaning in each stanza, as the whole poem stands. Overall nice comeback poem.
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[Destinee]

to me it seems as if each stanza could stand alone in it's own right and be perfect little poems but put together they create a deeper larger one. such a good write!