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This poem was inspired by 21 Guns - Greenday. Its about suicide and indecision.

 

 

 

 

 

Feel the wind as you stand at the edge

This cliff has never seemed so high

Why *choose tonight to die?

 

Clouds dance in front of the sun

Casting a shadow on your existance

Why do you live at such a distance?

 

You see the power of the waves

How they crash and fall away

When you leave, what will they say?

 

You're heart breaks in half right at the thought

You don't understand, you're so confused

The world made you feel so unused.

 

The sky’s now painted red

Take a deep breath, its time to decide

Will you and the rocks collide?

 

Author's Note

*edited/fixed

If anyone out there has a good idea for a title to this poem, please let me know!!!! I'm absolutley stumped and I need help! Please, from one writer to another! Thanks :P

Reviews

[Thorn]

It's morbid, but so many good things are ^^

I really like this poem, just like the song that you drew inspiration from. However, in line three of verse one you should have written "choose", not "chose".
That's a minor little thing, though. This is well worded, well presented, and just plain awesome.
I look forward to reading more from you!