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In the dark

I spin

Round and round

Not knowing

Is this way

Left or right

Up or down

Asking directions

That are answered

As hollow echoes

Against black walls

Of shallow halls

Surrounded by souls

Still alone

Wondering which

Are friend or foe

 

 

Does it matter

For none

Really know my heart

Know me

Apart from the next

Just passer bys

In this life

And all of them

Want my trust

Though... they trust not

I hear there words

Like lost spirits

Each saying one thing

Then doing another

Confusing circles

Of confusion

I no longer know

Where I am

Who I am

Or why

I am

Reviews

[Mariah]

this is sooooooo goood. !
just to let you know it's already added to my favorites. ! :)

i don't know if you noticed,
but the centering almost looks like a funnel, or a twister,
which represents the spinning you are feeling.
nice touch !
even though i don't think you did it on purpose. haha. ! but good. !

[Destiny]

Deep. Very emotional. I get the image of someone falling through eternal darkness with unfamiliar hands groping along the way in the first "paragraph". Also there is a sense of desperation throughout that keeps the reader captivated. Very nice. Thank you for writing.
♥Destiny♥

[Charisma Moonfairy]

I really like this one. I feel the same way so often and it is harder and harder to live each day because of it. Good job as always,