My Angel

Fade to Darkness

 

 

 

like a dream she entered the livingroom

seemlessly sliding in and out of time

darkness followed behind her

her shadow over powered the light

 

her curves controlled my eyes

directed them along her flesh

captured within my mindless lust

her sheer nylons occupied my thoughts

 

her eyes held within them

my past transgressions and sins

she projected each one to me

my soul was penetrated in her glance

 

her fingers grazed upon my face

jasmin was her sweet scent

her soft lips pressed against mine

an angelic kiss of death

 

my will surrendered into her loving arms

she held me still like endless time

we danced romantically like two lost lovers

sensually she returned me back to earth

 

I could hear her whispering

forgiveness for the dying

her words to repent

echoed in my bones

 

now I lay me down to sleep

I pray the lord my soul to keep

if I should die before I wake

I pray the lord my soul to take

 

her darkness engulfed my life

beauty faded to blackness

jasmin scent discepated into nothingness

her last words the last I heard

 

"Good Night"

Author's Note

As a child the "now I lay me down to sleep prayor" use to give me all kinds of dark thoughts....

Reviews

[Honeypot]

Me too. The prayer made me think some pretty strange thoughts when I was little. I really liked this one. It has a sinister yet sensual feel to it. The third stanza about past transgressions really got my mind to wondering what those transgressions might be. It was intriguing because I didn't know if my sympathies were with her or him. This was a great read.

[Constance L. Hartwell]

This piece was mysterious and very sexy. I wonder what kind of thoughts you were thinking as a child lol Great write, nonetheless.

[Meredith Leigh]

Well I really liked this. It was sweet, yet dark. Awesome weite! The flow was great!

- Kriss

[Thanatos Darkraven]

I think we've all had our share of unpleasantness due to that prayer. Even one of my works uses it, lol. But this was a very well penned write. I love the imagery. It was a very good read and I enjoyed it very much. Keep up the good work.

[deeps]

I really like this, i can feel the passion to the touch, well written piece

[cilla]

Really nice work � and you know, that foolish prayer always kind of bothered me. Is that what we really want to pray for? That someone would come and steal our soul in the darkness? No wonder we have nightmares and dark angels coming to call from our sub-conscious.

Your description in the opening verses are darkly moody but convey that sense of how we can be so easily seduced by a dark angel before falling back to earth and all of its grim realities.

Great stuff and a wonderful photo to go with it � your talents are growing �

[Kelley]

LOL I loved this and many thoughts were brought along the way.
This was very interesting and could be taken in may different ways.

Your a great writer and I will have to read more of wrork.


Kelley

[Sensuous2000]

This blew me away everything about it was dark and sensuous yet somehow ..inviting. What a talent you have shown here and I will read more of you for sure..

[Allie]

i'm not a big fan of erotica
but you're a really good writer (Y) lol