Innocence

Innocence

A Poem by Blooming Flower
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Writing this to the instrumental “Innocence” by Takaaki Izumi. Written in 2023

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A newborn infant. A young child who knows no wrong or right. They don’t know how horrible the world could be. They see roses instead of thorns. They allow you to see things you’ve long forgotten about. They’re like flowers growing in asphalt. They make you feel new. They help you forget about all your worries and sins. You can just exist with them. You see everything through their eyes. The roses instead of the thorns. The calm rain instead of the violent storms.

© 2024 Blooming Flower


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Maybe dear poet. We need to wear Rose-colored glasses sometime.
"They see roses instead of thorn"
It would be nice to have the hope and the eyes of a child. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


This is a beautiful description of a brightly, curious, sweet, innocent child. Well done!

"They’re like flowers growing in asphalt. They make you feel new. " terrific analogy!

Posted 2 Months Ago



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Added on April 17, 2024
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Blooming Flower
Blooming Flower

Lancaster, PA



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I like writing poetry and short stories. I am sixteen years old and run cross country/track. I would love any feedback/suggestions! more..

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