Drifter

This is a Prose Poem that I wrote while listening to an instrumental song called Drifter by Takaaki Izumi. It's very short but I only wrote this while the song was playing. It was also written in 2023

The waves. Such powerful yet delicate things. They could destroy you on an angry day yet they can lap at your feet and wash your feelings away. Such a beautiful thing. Giving us beautiful shells and stones and patterns in the sand. The salt in the air and the wind playing with your hair. A place where your mind drifts to the realm under the surface. Deep where the fish swim and the seaweed sways.

Author's Note

Just want opinions. I have a lot of writing pieces from songs like this.

Reviews

[Pete]

very enjoyable, carefree write.love the part about hair and the last line ... :)

[Ashen May]

Very beautiful. Love the way that the ocean is described. Definitely a favorite